Sunday, September 12, 2010

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Khwabon ki dehliz se laut to aaye hum
Kitne hi samandar dil mein samaye hum
Haqeeqat ki basti mein khudko kheech laye hum
Dua karo is saans ke safar mein usey bhool jaye hum

~Kashish
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6 comments:

  1. Harash MahajanSeptember 12, 2010 at 8:19 AM

    Aapki tehreerieN anjaane meiN merii nazer se Guzri toh achanak nazreiN thham si gayie.....aapki kalam bahoot kutchh keh rahi hai....kutch misre bahoot hi dil ko chhoone waale keh gaye aap....achha likhte haiN aap....God bless you always..


    Harash Mahajan

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  2. Meri Ankahi DastaanSeptember 12, 2010 at 10:26 AM

    Bahot shukria ...Aapki comment maayne rakhty hai

    Sarhaney ka shukria ...Nawazish

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  3. UnknownSeptember 17, 2010 at 1:45 AM

    Very nice.....why so serious....would like to see some diff poem angles frm ur site...

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  4. नीलिमा शर्मा Neelima Sharma September 17, 2010 at 10:59 PM

    kam lafz .udas lafz ..... but mayne bahut gahre

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  5. नीलिमा शर्मा Neelima Sharma September 17, 2010 at 10:59 PM

    kam lafz,udas lafz mayne kahi gahre

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  6. Meri Ankahi DastaanSeptember 20, 2010 at 11:05 PM

    @Rahul
    shukria for coments.
    Main yhan kisiko padhwane key liye nahi likhty
    Main apni marzi se likhty hun ... Its not a public blog to fulfil anyones requirements..

    @Neelima
    Thanks dear...luvs :)

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